I believe what you posted was actually very reasonable.

But, consider this, suppose you added a little content?
I ain't saying your content isn't good, however suppose you added a title to possibly 
get people's attention? I mean LPM UIN FAS Bengkulu Benchmarking Ke 
UIN Sunan Gunung Jati Bandung &#8211; LPM UINFAS Bengkulu is kinda plain. You could glance at Yahoo's home page and see how they 
create post headlines to get people to click.

You might add a video or a related picture or two to get readers interested about 
what you've written. In my opinion, it might bring your website a little bit more interesting.