I believe what you posted was actually very reasonable.
However, what about this? what if you typed a catchier post title?
I ain't saying your information is not good., but what if you added a post title to 
maybe get a person's attention? I mean LPM UIN FAS Bengkulu Benchmarking Ke UIN Sunan Gunung 
Jati Bandung &#8211; LPM UINFAS Bengkulu is kinda vanilla.
You ought to look at Yahoo's front page and watch how they write 
article titles to grab people to click. You might try adding 
a video or a picture or two to get people interested 
about what you've written. Just my opinion, it might make your posts a little bit more interesting.