I think that what you posted made a bunch of sense.
But, what about this? what if you added a little information? I am not saying your information is not solid., but what if you added something 
to maybe get a person's attention? I mean LPM UIN FAS 
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create article titles to grab people interested.
You might add a related video or a picture or two to grab people excited about what you've got to say.

Just my opinion, it might make your posts a little 
livelier.