I believe what you posted was actually very reasonable.

However, what about this? suppose you were to create a killer headline?
I am not suggesting your information isn't good., but what if you added a headline to maybe grab 
folk's attention? I mean LPM UIN FAS Bengkulu Benchmarking Ke UIN Sunan Gunung Jati Bandung &#8211; LPM 
UINFAS Bengkulu is a little vanilla. You could look at Yahoo's front page and note how they create news titles to get viewers interested.
You might add a related video or a pic or two to grab people interested about what you've got 
to say. Just my opinion, it would bring your website a little 
bit more interesting.